The white space just kept me trained on the character who, although roughly drawn, had personality. He was likable.
Too many "Start" buttons. (Maybe this bothered me because I watched it more than once?)
Overall, I liked it.
Thanks very much, originally i hadnt planned to upload it to newgrounds, but when i did i thought it would be better with the preloader than without which is why that is there along with the other 2.
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